docs: improved section texts

Author: francelu

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@@ -41,13 +41,17 @@ <h2>How have sociocultural, economic, and geopolitical contexts been reflected i
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             At first glance, the Olympics look like so-called fair Games: the best athletes compete,
             and the best win. But is it really that simple?
-            The truth is, medals are influenced by much more than talent.
+            The truth is much more brutal.
+            Medals are influenced by much more than talent.
+            An athlete represents their country.
+            Nowadays, the Games increasingly feel like a competition between nations,
+            where the medal count is a source of national pride and international recognition.
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           <p>
-            Wealth, population, politics, and opportunities all play a role in who gets on the podium.
+            Wealth, population, politics, and opportunities all play a part in determining who gets to stand on the podium.
             We're going to see five axes behind medals in Olympics:
             gender representation, geography of medal winners, athlete body types,
             geopolitical disruptions, and economic fairness.
@@ -191,8 +195,8 @@ <h2>Which body type excels in a particular discipline?</h2>
             <p>
               This visualization compares medal-winning athletes by sport, discipline, year,
               gender, height, and weight. By exploring podiums across events, we can see how
-              certain body profiles appear more often in specific disciplines, showing how
-              athletic excellence is connected to both training and physical specialization.
+              certain body profiles appear more often in specific disciplines. This shows how
+              athletic excellence is connected to both training and physical particularities.
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@@ -237,7 +241,7 @@ <h2>How do geopolitical conflicts affect the Olympic Games?</h2>
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-              The Olympics are often presented as a moment of global unity, but they have
+              The Olympics are often presented as a moment of global unity. However, they have
               repeatedly been shaped by wars, boycotts, political tensions, and international
               conflicts. Some Games were cancelled entirely, while others were marked by
               protests, exclusions, or reduced participation.
@@ -247,7 +251,7 @@ <h2>How do geopolitical conflicts affect the Olympic Games?</h2>
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             <p>
               This visualization highlights key geopolitical events and shows how they affected
-              Olympic participation and medal performance. By exploring specific years and countries,
+              Olympic participation and medal rewards. By exploring specific years and countries,
               we can see how political decisions outside the stadium directly influenced who could
               compete, who stayed away, and how the Games were remembered.
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@@ -298,9 +302,9 @@ <h2>What would a fair distribution of Olympic medals look like?</h2>
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               This visualization compares actual medals with a “fair” medal distribution adjusted
-              by population and GDP. By looking beyond the raw medal count, we can question what
-              Olympic success really means and whether the podium reflects equal opportunity or
-              broader global inequalities.
+              by mean population and GDP. By looking beyond the raw medal count, we can question
+              what Olympic success really means and whether the podium reflects equal opportunity
+              or broader global inequalities.
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