From 13064d8ce73fcbbecdd1ce42870850990854fd9a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Luke Hoyland Date: Wed, 15 Oct 2025 16:10:55 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 1/6] Remove 'true anonymity' Discussed with Zoe Norden who didn't want to suggest that anonymity was guaranteed in perpetuity: only the Secure Messaging service has sufficient protections for full anonymity and the lifecycle of a correspondence may extend beyond that. Because there isn't space to explain all that we opted to just refer to "alternative methods" without making promises that go beyond technology. --- apps-rendering/src/components/Callout/calloutComponents.tsx | 5 ++--- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/apps-rendering/src/components/Callout/calloutComponents.tsx b/apps-rendering/src/components/Callout/calloutComponents.tsx index b8fb69d5aba..d5889b6f905 100644 --- a/apps-rendering/src/components/Callout/calloutComponents.tsx +++ b/apps-rendering/src/components/Callout/calloutComponents.tsx @@ -21,9 +21,8 @@ export const Disclaimer = () => ( encrypted and only the Guardian has access to your contributions. We will only use the data you provide us for the purpose of the feature and we will delete any personal data when we no longer require it for this - purpose. For true anonymity please use our{' '} - Secure Messaging service - instead. + purpose. For alternative ways to get in touch securely please see our{' '} + tips guide. ); From f3de14e2a4cdf2b9e56157afbde6d5e71b82b2d5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Luke Hoyland Date: Wed, 15 Oct 2025 16:13:32 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 2/6] Update calloutContact.tsx Revise anonymity claim to be specific to comms within Secure Messaging --- apps-rendering/src/components/Callout/calloutContact.tsx | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/apps-rendering/src/components/Callout/calloutContact.tsx b/apps-rendering/src/components/Callout/calloutContact.tsx index 5ec79439983..9b04b8c2cfd 100644 --- a/apps-rendering/src/components/Callout/calloutContact.tsx +++ b/apps-rendering/src/components/Callout/calloutContact.tsx @@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ const Disclaimer = ({ contacts }: { contacts: Contact[] }) => { const secureMessagingText = ( - For true anonymity please use our{' '} + For fully anonymous communication please use our{' '} Secure Messaging{' '} service instead. From 3df31c5a5ae846157446df63882e3e7d8475e23e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Luke Hoyland Date: Wed, 15 Oct 2025 16:17:21 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 3/6] Update CalloutComponents.tsx dotcom reword per zoe norden advice (see prior commits) --- .../src/components/Callout/CalloutComponents.tsx | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/dotcom-rendering/src/components/Callout/CalloutComponents.tsx b/dotcom-rendering/src/components/Callout/CalloutComponents.tsx index 3cbe05a5052..c16d50c061a 100644 --- a/dotcom-rendering/src/components/Callout/CalloutComponents.tsx +++ b/dotcom-rendering/src/components/Callout/CalloutComponents.tsx @@ -216,13 +216,13 @@ export const CalloutTermsAndConditions = () => ( encrypted and only the Guardian has access to your contributions. We will only use the data you provide us for the purpose of the feature and we will delete any personal data when we no longer require it for this - purpose. For true anonymity please use our{' '} + purpose. For alternative ways to get in touch securely please see our{' '} - Secure Messaging + tips guide {' '} - service instead. + . ); From 276f49564c21a15c4fde58f30e72fa374850c6f9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Luke Hoyland Date: Wed, 15 Oct 2025 16:18:50 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 4/6] Update MessageUs.tsx remove 'true anonymity' --- dotcom-rendering/src/components/Callout/MessageUs.tsx | 5 ++--- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/dotcom-rendering/src/components/Callout/MessageUs.tsx b/dotcom-rendering/src/components/Callout/MessageUs.tsx index 9d3063f8d04..d2e12fec680 100644 --- a/dotcom-rendering/src/components/Callout/MessageUs.tsx +++ b/dotcom-rendering/src/components/Callout/MessageUs.tsx @@ -96,9 +96,8 @@ const Disclaimer = ({ contacts }: { contacts: CalloutContactType[] }) => { const secureMessagingText = ( - For true anonymity please use our{' '} - Secure Messaging{' '} - service instead. + For alternative ways to get in touch securely please see our{' '} + tips guide. ); From 5544a9f66dd0cae9b22fddd56e1ad4a194ee77e9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Luke Hoyland Date: Wed, 15 Oct 2025 16:19:30 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 5/6] Update CalloutComponents.tsx remove space --- dotcom-rendering/src/components/Callout/CalloutComponents.tsx | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/dotcom-rendering/src/components/Callout/CalloutComponents.tsx b/dotcom-rendering/src/components/Callout/CalloutComponents.tsx index c16d50c061a..89b20b6eb48 100644 --- a/dotcom-rendering/src/components/Callout/CalloutComponents.tsx +++ b/dotcom-rendering/src/components/Callout/CalloutComponents.tsx @@ -222,7 +222,7 @@ export const CalloutTermsAndConditions = () => ( href="https://www.theguardian.com/tips" > tips guide - {' '} + . ); From 25352e69399a2137f4277a7fb55352366f47cd46 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Luke Hoyland Date: Wed, 15 Oct 2025 16:21:44 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 6/6] Update MessageUs.tsx make dotcom match apps --- dotcom-rendering/src/components/Callout/MessageUs.tsx | 5 +++-- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/dotcom-rendering/src/components/Callout/MessageUs.tsx b/dotcom-rendering/src/components/Callout/MessageUs.tsx index d2e12fec680..81859950605 100644 --- a/dotcom-rendering/src/components/Callout/MessageUs.tsx +++ b/dotcom-rendering/src/components/Callout/MessageUs.tsx @@ -96,8 +96,9 @@ const Disclaimer = ({ contacts }: { contacts: CalloutContactType[] }) => { const secureMessagingText = ( - For alternative ways to get in touch securely please see our{' '} - tips guide. + For fully anonymous communication please use our{' '} + Secure Messaging{' '} + service instead. );